Hmm that was a bit better but I'll show you a little somethin,
Comin wit metaphors so Pha-reel you'd think I was Frontin,
I see your elevatin a little but not enough give it some time,
I'm like War and Peace, to me you're Gossebumps by R.L. Stein,


quick key lol...somethin like that bruvva lo...Just use creative metaphor and rhyme scheme...you are using VERY basic rhymes...just listen to how the words sound together and it'll work out. lol

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