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Old 09-15-05, 05:44 PM   #9
SINISTER
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.:KRIT and AITZ i thought this was decent needs a little bit of elevation but i liked the medifored that Aitz used Example " home envasions are like smokin that bong, after the first hit im on..." Also the little bit of wordplay used " rollin wit a meat-clevers, never seen a colab come meaner
knockin on doors like street sweapers, hard attacks come deeper"....You just need to fix your structure keep spittin homie.............

Krit my favorite line was " AITZ meets me half way holdin a knife-to-a-hostage
i say "wheres the fukn money or your life-will-get-lost-bitch" that really had me laugh for a second... i can see your really trieng and you have potential... second favorite thing was but its another mans blood he says "i sliced his life when i used the knife"
quickly find the cash n drive-this-ride-into-the-night. <---Shows the abillity to story tell..... Keep droppin....

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