So amanda does it again, Just let me say i could sing this just by reading it"
I can say i really felt the flow, on both behalves.... Willa, somtimes your simplicity is what makes that ish dope.... Your flow and stucture where key, vocab was alright i diden't see too many meta's tho (gotta love them metas) Mentalz thumbs up man i just wanted to let you know my favorite line was "
As I sit with my blood-flow tapped an’ spent
Half content ta’ leave the past trapped in cement"
You really spit some fire with that.....

Props to both of you !

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