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Old 09-17-05, 11:36 AM   #60
wyteknyte
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Mystic Chaos-Your structure was pretty decent, i got a good flow.Your vocab was rather simple no complexed words to make your verse better.Your creativity was pretty original...liked it..kept me reading throughout the whole verse....your imagery and emotion were up there...probally what made your verse so exciting to read about...overall 7/10

mizz fyre-Your verse, i fee was structured a little differently.I still got the same amount of flow.I feel the way you approached this was pretty creative and helped you through out your verse. Although you were great in your emotion in your verse i feeel you lacked in imagery.Felt a bit lost at times.....overall 6/10

v/Mystic Chaos
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