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BeAnToWN rEp
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IP:
Voted For: Bone Collector
Structure-Tha Notorious D, had pretty much the better structure felt i could flow to his a lot better.bone collector your structure was hard to follow, felt i couldnt flow to it as well
Multis-Neither had any apparent multis that i could see.Both need to up on that to complex your verse more.
Vocab-Again neither had any vocab that was presentable, felt both verses were below the average on that, up on that to enhance your verse.
punches-I feel bone collector had the better punches, they were original and they had good wordplay and creativity to them.As for tha notorious d you sorta complimetented him in the first line.....and whats wrong wit white girls? my girls white....dont see much of a good punch there.
personals-Clear to see bone collector racks up this catergorie, simply for the fact that they were presentable un like tha notorious d...up on ur verse period lol
originality-Both were pretty original not the best battle ive seen eh, id say v/bone collector
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