shits deep......nice vocab....structure was nice.....lots of emotion...imagery was sick.....i liked this peice alot.... this is tha first om i've read from u.....ill be readin more of em if u keep ritin like this ......i'd have to giv it a 9/10.....keep it commin.......

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