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wow, this really blew me away...your structure was a problem for me mainly...i feel you could have structurized it more appropriatley but other than that...your emotion was breath taking, felt you used veryy efficient imagery....one of the best ive seen so far......keep doin ya thing....man 8/10 no doubt.....
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