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Old 09-19-05, 08:47 PM   #2
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Learn some new words. All of your rhymes are basic. Your whole rhyme scheme is basic also. It is really boring right now. Stick with one topic and expand on it. One way you can learn is from practicing. Just keep writing and you'll get better. There are also tutorials on RV that can help you with this.
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