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A Life Of Chryme
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lol, i hope you dont think i was beefin wit you...my bad......alright check this.....
try and make all your lines be like this: blah blah blah
blah blah blah
Etc. see what i mean...it will enhance your flow. also...try and expand you vocabulary doing this will make you look smarter lol and enhance you verse....multis is a key in a verse but some times its not a big key.....main thing would be to get your point across...and even though this time you did it in a basic form you still did it....keep elevatin and workin at it...ull get it eventually....1
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