word my girl droppin that spoken word..NOT bad my first time peepin a spoken word drop and im feelin it...nice Topic nice imagery nice words used..im feelin ya emotion fits well with the topic...But...indeed i do want to hear u on some grimey shit lol...some gut pourin in a poetry polite kind of way lol if thats possible

..lol ne who keep up the good work....just work on quality a lil...i got bad quality too lol imma start lettin somebody mix mines from now on. but ne who ...keep droppin em.