I've only read Mak's part since he asked me to. Hmm to be honest, it's ok, but your rhyme scheme and vocabulary are too simple. Too stretched so doesn't flow too well. Other than that the actual subject matter is not bad.
Sorry I'm pretty critical of topicals cos I read and translate a lot of serious rap texts plus I write a lot in general (but not topical songs hehe)

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel