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Old 09-21-05, 08:44 PM   #13
Devin
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^^ Lol

Anyways Nice Verse From Both I Can Really Picture The Intro That Really Set The Whole Piece Of And It Was A Good Start

I Can Tell How You Did The Structure Nice Way To Do Somthing Diffrent I Read It Useing The Periods And It Flowed Good

Hook Is Good I Like The T.V. Part And The Choruse Comes In Nicely

This Would Be Real Tight On Audio Mak Would Just Haft To Spit Fast Cause Is Lines Are Longer

Overall Nice Drop R.T.F. On Real Life Click It In My Sig
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