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Originally Posted by will appear
yea ur rhymes scheme is the only thing anyone can complain about btu his is probably hte best piece ive seen on rv in a long time ur vocab flow imagery i think ur the best toopical writer on the site personalls
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Basicly everything i think, The ryme sheme is alright, The pice was nice and the vocabulary was excellent man, I give this a 8.5/10 easily, I love how you put it together too...The structure wasen't my genere but i really can't complain...You can tell you put some effort into this.....Nice Drop
