BC: It felt like your flow was a bit choppy in some parts, and that you forced some of the rhymes in places. Vocab wasnt over-done at all, in fact you coulda tossed more in to liven it up a little. The imagery was good, but your lackings brought it down a little. The best part about your piece would be the entire thing. It never got off-topic and the rhyme scheme was not too bad. Not going to mention structure b/c it doesnt really matter anyways.

SP: You had more consistant structure and flow, in my opinion, however towards the middle it felt like you were given up, then you rushed the ending. You had good vocab for the most part, all used in the right places and a few multies to liven it up a bit. Nice job bro.

Overview: Nice drop BC/SP as always theres room for elevation, but you guys threw down quite well this time, keep it up!

RTF

-Metnalz

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