Damn, some nice imagery! I liked that topic alot. You had pretty good flow throughout the entire piece man. The only thing I would suggest would be uppin' your vocab and addin' some multies in the mix. Also try to add some symbolism, hints about what your typin' without typin' it. I always enjoy piece that have that down. Nice drop man, and good luck. Keep droppin'. Peace.

-Mentalz

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