who's singin? is that akon cuz it sounds bad for akon
yea your quality aint that great, your flow si a little to flow, try and speed it up man, emotion i cant tell really until your quality is a lil better. lyrics weren't to bad. i believe the 2nd cat is implicit, his quality is a little bit better, flow kinda shaky, his voice is meh and you can till hes young lol. but potential from both to be somin good.
maybe yall gonna need para to feature on a track sometime
can yall rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869