For once K Trini has a point, a lot of times people rate verses on their vocab. If you use second grade vocab, then ya you need to think of some better words. More descriptive, but don't go and look in a thesaurus for a meaning to every word. Make it sound natural.

A good healthy vocab makes you sound intelligent. Instead of saying that a person changes his mind a lot, use fickle. Means the same thing. But the people who look up every word, just sound like they are trying to be intelligent.

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