I dont like the start of the beat, actually overall I dont like thsi beat at all. Your flow is really shaky, you rushed a lot of your lines. Your emotion needs work as well. lyrics weren't to bad but i think they could use a bit better. the hook you did was kinda boring like you just said the same line a bunch of times. quality aint to bad the adlibs were alright but you'll learn different ways as you play wit cool edit more.

anyway can you rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869

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