really feelin the beat.....

yea definitely relax on the mic more....you kinda seem like your a lil tight up.....

you gotta pretty good voice...i think once you get your delivery and presence down...your voice will really compliment everything.....

lyrics are good.......

delivery is def better than last track....but you still gotta work on it....and your emotion on this track should be upped a lil bit too......

overall this is your best....still some things you def gotta work on.......flow being first IMO....then everything will come after that........just keep elevating.....decent song man

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