Your concept is ok.. Not exactly something that provokes emotion or thought.. It kinda makes me say "Well ain't that some shit? I wonder what's on TV.." Dumb down your language because no one really wants to read that shit.. Haha. Not tryin to shoot you two down, it was pretty good. You had nice flow, and the imagery was well done. Truely, keep droppin'. Peace.

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