Vocabulary: Basic
Flow: Okay
Structure: Okay
Concept: Not much to say. Unoriginal.
Topic: ...no thanks.
Favorite Lines: Nothing quotable.
Rating: 6/10
Advice: Uncreative. Find a good topic, just talking about yourself is boring as fuck, especially when you lack wordplay and creativity.

RTF on Dead Beat Holiday(which is really entitled Pharaoh's Sarcophagus, I just made a mistake.)

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