Chief you got better presence than I heard from you before... And you wayy more clear than usual. Just back up from the mic a little. Your emotion was pretty decent, your delivery was kinda laid back.. which is nice for this beat. Drama Queen, your mic was making a lotta noise, sound like pops outta nowheres, I like both your verses.. but you put your emotion in the wrong spaces, like youd stress the beginning and end of your bars when you don't have to... your flow was kinda shaky, your bars would start off fine but then you rush in extra words. Altogether not too bad, kiddies. Keep working at it.

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