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Old 10-05-05, 08:12 PM   #7
leady
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From: U.K Reppin the LS18
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u a bitch if u a person who this MITE disTURB
ima roll up on u bitchez in ya WHITE suBURB

the different sounds in su and dis breaks up the multie.... makes it more internal rhyming than multy

cuz if u wanna talk 2 me like that u gotta STOP TALKIN
then i'll b standin there, in ya blood, POP LOCKIN

thats forced cos talkin and lockin are pronounced differently meanin u needed to force ur pronunciation on one of them to change

but even with the multies, they themselves are basic multies, and your rhyme scheme is simple, and predictable.
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