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okay so anyway. i hate this song to begin with
Col-B your flow was real basic. very predictable as leady said. lyrics were basic as well. try to come up with other ways to say all that gun talk. quality wasnt bad. pretty good actually. mic prescence wasnt too good. just keep working and you'll get it
Payn - one word to sum up your verse is umm.........wow. wow at the lack of emotion. wow at how off your flow was. wow at you talking over the beat. wow at your lyrics not being very good either. i mean if this was your first audio, then that's somewhat understandable. but seriously you have to get into it. you didnt match this song at all. learn to ride the beat.
this was not a very good song. i think both need to up their emotion cause it sounds real boring like i dont even wanna listen to it. just practice on that and payn practice on riding the beat.
please return the favor and leave feed for my new song in the sig
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