honestly...not feelin this track...i don't like the beat majorly...i mean it's ok but not my style...Chief...you sound like ya speech is impeded somehow...flow is ok...but emotion is lazy not laid back...delivery was ok but re-wordin a few bars woulda been cool to enhance flow...
DQ...lol...1st time on the mic?...no?...well it sounds like it coz you're on a monotone level i can actually picture you standin there absolutely still and the only thing movin is ya mouth...emotion needs to be upped...don't be scared on the mic...vocally u sound aight jus get vocal tones right...it's harming your flow...blatantly sounds like you readin...but if you chose to read ya lyrics...don't read them feel them...also get to grips wit breath control...you'll need to improve that...writing style is a major fact in style...try and write around your style...
but overall improvement still needed by both cats keep droppin
