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intro is kool....speats.. i like you lol u jus need more emotion in ya tracks,... sound angry maan.. u'll sound alot better... flow is kool lyrics are pretty good... like your verse.. adlibs are ite..

hook could be more uplifting.. its the same as the verse... u should double over ya voclas for that

inter... iite.. emoion is iite could be better tho... flow is kool... lyrics are straight man

yeeh overall its a pretty nmice track jus work on your emotions and delivery...

keep droppin em,

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