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Old 10-16-05, 01:19 PM   #1
XM
Within Eternity's Wither
 
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Death Of A Respected Rival (Nos look inside)

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Death Of A Respected Rival

This neglected foe, radiant of an sceptic glow
Pressure low, breathes deep, but his breaths are slow
He expects to go, chest fill'd, redirects the flow
He awaits his death, he's scared, but accepts it thoh
It's regreted so, reminist, now depression shows
How his rival lies in the mist, much respect is shown
Detest the tone, shallow fate, now he's left alone
The hate brought them together, it was best to grow
His rest is prone, to silence, from aggressive moans
Adjust his soul, buries rival, then he bless'd his home
Next he romes, impressed, his next step is known
Collects the dust of time, as he corrects his throne

this was a collab i did its nothing special ehh........i wanna see
what kinda feed i get it only took me bout 20 mins when i did it
so ya kno ehhh.....whateva
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