I thought that this was pretty dope for such a short verse. My favorite part like L.I. said was the rhyming. Vocab and flow were really good. Ur structure was great too.

My favorite bar was:

"Next he romes, impressed, his next step is known"
"Collects the dust of time, as he corrects his throne"

Why? I just liked the way u said and it flowed very nice for an ending.

Peace. Hope u return the favor