Gkillaz
Your rhymes are like food thats been sittin' out gettin old...
K.S. isnt bold if we were playin' poker this kid would fold...
no punch really
Startin' to grow mold and it seems like you give a fuck-less...
Surprised you didnt duck this, K.S. will never know success...
punch?
It would be luck I guess if King came up wit one punchline...
Talk alot of shit, but cant spit one line come crunch time...
no punchline.. you dissin ya self?
Fakes rhymes... and weak vocab is all King's rap possesses...
Dicks stuck up like dresses fallin aparts all he progresses...
eh.
Like an occupation, I should get paid to exterminate haterz...
Serve you like a waitor... RV - you can pay me for it later...
best line i guess

You lacked punches, alot.. Try to use similes/meta's and try to use better vocab.. Keep droppin homie.

K.S.
Killa of G’z…...kid I’ll merk ya ass, blast ya name to the floor
Cuz I’ll kill a letter with a killer letter, like postin’ anthrax thru ya door
dope
I’m stuck for punches, I’ll just end ya performance like curtain calls
Cuz yo, I don’t know shit about shit,
…………so ya know I’m short on personals.
dopeness + witty
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!
decent
Spittin keystyles, no wonder headaches have got this G floored
Cuz his mom keeps bangin his head, for droolin’ on the keyboard
ok
But yo, this kid is elevating, his skillz increase more and more
He’s leavin’ his Legacy……60 battles, each one wacker than before.
decent at best

Your verse was good. Full of humor and some dope punches throughout. Good job.

V/ K.S.

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