not really look'n fo this to stay open ya'll can close this if ya like no mattas to me
and N. Killa...................keep ya comments to ya self if you can't say nothing nice lmao
this piece contain all the critical components of a good writing which is........

Emotion
Imagry
Vocab
Multies(which made it flow well)
and it kept consistant to the story and topic

but w/e im pretty sure your post makes you nice.........lol

Here's a hint.............^^^that comment above contains this lil thing called
Sarcasm.......enjoy yaself

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