Voted For: Defined

Defined

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
Forced..
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
Nah..
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
Decent..
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
Didn't connect..
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters
Pretty decent..

KriZ

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
Not worded into a punch..
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
Not a punch..
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
Why did you fuck up your rhyme scheme? Not a punch anyway.
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Doesn't rhyme with anything.
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/
Intestines and Instincts don't rhyme.. not a punch..

Overall, Defined came with a pretty lackluster verse with only 2 decent punches. But, KriZ didn't come with any remotely decent lines. His rhyme scheme went to shit about half way through, and it just didn't work out for him. He didn't word his lines into punches, so when it comes down to it.. Defined gets my vote. He at least had punches and a few them came out decent.

Vote - Defined

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.