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Old 10-17-05, 07:23 PM   #6
Magic5
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Voted For: Illist

Illist

This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
Decent..
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
Cool..
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
Pretty good..
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
Coolness..
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops
Haha. Good.

Drop Dead

..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest,
Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’..
Nah, man..
..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages,
Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’..
Forced as hell..
..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs,
Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’..
Played as hell..
..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob,
Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’..
Forced..
..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame,
Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’..
Barely decent..

Overall, Illist's verse was good. He ripped Drop Dead's name with some original shit. Good punches.. good wordplay.. just an overall pretty good verse. Drop Dead's verse was very forced. The wordplay didn't make sense some of the time (I lose shins?) and it just made for a not too good of verse.. So, in conclusion, I have to give my vote to Illist for the better overall verse.

Vote - Illist

Drop Dead, you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.