Voted For: Drop Dead

Drop Dead-
Dope enough verse seems like you bit it... Lol i heard some of the lines before... Good flow and structure.. will nvm... take that back.. ok structure enough with the :';,.,' shit.. seriously it makes it so hard to read.... You didn't have many personals.. thats why it seems like a you bit it from someone... Anyways it was dope good job.

Illist -
First things first.. You went over 10 lines.... You had ok structure farely easy to read ... didn't make too much sense though.. hard to understand some things in that verse you had. nice multies thought that was a plus that i thought stood out the most... You both had good verses if you would have made more sense to it then you would have got it in my opioin

V/DD