first off.....quality is ass.....

beat is ok.....

hook...not bad...it sounds shitty cause the quality....but i think it has some potential to be catchy....

lyrics are ok...using some decent multies at some points...although they could be better...a lot of it seems too basic....

your delivery on the verse....seems like your trying to be quiet...i think the delivery could be upped a lot...

just work on that....word...

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