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Old 10-17-05, 08:14 PM   #1
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Old 10-17-05, 08:58 PM   #2
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come on kidz leave some feed!
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Old 10-17-05, 11:53 PM   #3
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Listening...

Beat is pretty good...a lil repetive...Whoa...most definetely work on your quality...read my tutorial about using shitty mics haha. Flow is pretty coo...lyrics are pretty good too. Flow is a lil choppy in places, but it can be worked out...delivery was good.

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Old 10-18-05, 12:10 AM   #4
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first off.....quality is ass.....

beat is ok.....

hook...not bad...it sounds shitty cause the quality....but i think it has some potential to be catchy....

lyrics are ok...using some decent multies at some points...although they could be better...a lot of it seems too basic....

your delivery on the verse....seems like your trying to be quiet...i think the delivery could be upped a lot...

just work on that....word...
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Old 10-18-05, 12:13 AM   #5
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how do i make my quality better?
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Old 10-18-05, 12:16 AM   #6
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Old 10-18-05, 12:22 AM   #7
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chea yo i record on Acoustica Mixcraft but its on a trial! and ima download da crack version of adobe but yo iight i got you but yo iwhen i do this with adobe my mic is Built into my Headphonez,so how wold i do this one to sound good and yeh i got da rest of da steps!but yo on adobe i get mad cuz i cant record ad libs or i dont know how can u help me with that to if u got aim hit me up on
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Old 10-18-05, 12:24 AM   #8
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and also...please return the favor and leave feed on the track i just posted....what we about....thanks

and i can also help you with a couple things...AIM - Wigullett1202
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Old 10-18-05, 12:25 AM   #9
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I can help you as well.

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Old 10-18-05, 04:02 AM   #10
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Old 10-18-05, 01:45 PM   #11
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smh UPPIN.......................
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Old 10-18-05, 02:13 PM   #12
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hmmmm..you seem to be lacking quality if this was good quality then it would b a lot btteer flow is good bit off sometimes not much good delivery...exept the quality i think ruins this trak ....good emotion used lyrics r bit basic...rtf on my Ghetto Strrets
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