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10-16-05, 02:28 PM | #1 | ||||
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Speats-Jason Has To Die
IP: F91E FCB7
Jason Has To Die(diss track)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=2976750&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=2976750&q=hi i left feed on intermental feat implicit and drama queen's work your shit oh and this song is incomplete, i just never finished it so Last edited by Speats : 10-16-05 at 02:32 PM. |
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10-16-05, 02:50 PM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
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10-16-05, 05:07 PM | #3 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
come on i always leave feed and no one and replying you fucking assholes
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10-16-05, 05:19 PM | #4 | ||||
NO SURRENDER
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beats decent..
cool intro cool hook, nice effects on the vocals...am feelin the mixing and background effects lunch line was nice, flows decent. Pretty good track, good shit.
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10-16-05, 09:54 PM | #5 | ||||
Hell yeah
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10-16-05, 11:14 PM | #6 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Damn...likin this beat so far... Intro sets the topic that I was guessin... Is that the hook in the beginning..? Pretty decent flow...haha some funny punches in there...LMFAO at your closer...A pretty nice track...delivery and emotion were lacking a bit I thought...dubs were WAY too loud though I'm afraid. But overall, good track, keep it up. |
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10-17-05, 02:52 PM | #8 | ||||
Champion
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beat is dope..
I know how much you hate this guy.. lol.. im def feelin the intro... LMAOOOO these lyrics funny let this boy hear it flow good good shit
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10-17-05, 04:46 PM | #9 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 3D49 422E
thanksss upping on this
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10-17-05, 07:28 PM | #10 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
Hmm somin i noticed on this, your voice faded in and out really awkwardly, the flow was alright. after you did the first hook there and then layered your verse wit that gurl/normal voice it sounded wierd. the lyrics are actually pretty good. the beat is pretty good too, i can see your coming along way with your audio skills I'm glad you never quited. but anyway props and this is a pretty good song man.
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10-17-05, 07:34 PM | #11 | ||||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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the beats pretty ill...ya need too work on mixing....the beginning flow is pretty cool...if its the hook its a nice melody with the beat....ya lyrics were decent...not too shabby..ya coulda used a bit more emotion in it....but ya switch ups were good...this is an other track that i can say u gettin better on...overrall not too bad fam.....nice diss track...keep um coming
overall-7.3/10 Return the fav.- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211670
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10-17-05, 08:11 PM | #12 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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LMAo yo nice lyriks
the beat was koo but i herd better from you this was a koo piece u served da kat,everything was on point!nice effects!shyt once again another dope drop!hey RTF in ma ( from da hood )
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10-19-05, 05:00 PM | #13 | ||||
Hell yeah
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10-19-05, 10:11 PM | #14 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
ok listening....beat is good....
damn hook is nice man....good job on that.... your dubs are a lil bit off on a few parts..... delivery is ok... the end of the 1st verse...flow falls off a bit...you kinda try n let the beat catch up with you.... ehh wasnt feeling the closing thing..where you kinda sang.... overall...the hook stood out on this track...props on that...
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10-22-05, 02:49 PM | #15 | ||||
Hell yeah
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