Voted For: Illist

This IS What I Think

Illist
This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
....Was That A Play On His NAme Initails? If so .,..Nice !!
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
..LOL This Wasnt A Good punch But Damn It MAde me laugh my ass offf
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
ryme was kinda off but You did ya Thang with the punch
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
....Nice....
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops
....Damn Now That Was Nice...

Drop Dead
..Stab Thru Your Best, As The Mag’ll Spray And Grab At Ya Vest,
Till The Rounds “Nip-Ill/Nipple” Like ‘What You Have On Ya Chest’..
....Kinda Weak....
..I’ll Make Contusions, When Bruisin' And Also Break Scrimmages,
Punches Hit Low Till “Ill-Lose-Shins/Illusions” Like ‘Fake Images’..
.....Played And You Forcin Ya Rymes Man..
..The Pain’s Massive Herb, When I Sustain N’ Grain Passive Slurs,
Then Watch You Run And “Take, Flight” Like ‘Plane Passengers’..
....Good Concept ..>Weak Punch..
..You Bitch Made… Pray And Lose, As I Know Your Stayin' Noob,
Truth Is That Ya Jus A “Cow-Word/Coward” Without ‘Sayin' Moo’..
....Again No Good Direct punch/....
..Kno I’ve Tore Ya Brain, Bore The Blame, When I Gore Ya Frame,
Cuz U Just Been “Bitch, Slapped” Like The ‘Callout Forum Name’..
......Aii...

Overall Man I Think That You had some nice concepts but Weak pucnhez bcuz you worded this worngly and you used some played lines man and you was forcin Yoself ..Let the punch ride if the person doesnt get it then damn them ..get what im sayin?.,.....Next time try wording it better and using deeper concepts

Overall My Vote goes to Illist for at the most Being more original and throwin better punchez

so my vote goes to Illist

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