Voted For: Defined

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
0....didn't diss the oppenent...seemed more like a threat.
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
0...same as previous bar.
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
0...this bar didn't rhyme...and no punch,again
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
0...threats...and didn't rhyme.
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/*
Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker.
0...threats...again.

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
4...meh...ite.
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
0....no punch,just babbling.
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
1....weak.
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
3..well,at least it dissed.
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters
3...bah.....you still won.

kriz..
tht verse you posted was awful,honestly.In a battle,your sopposed to diss/clown/demean the oppenent.Sayin they runnin outta time,or ur'll kill them,does NOT diss the oppenent in any way at all.So stop with the threats and start wit the punches.
Defined.
also a weak verse from you...but u at least dissed...so...you win.

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