Reminds me of my own writing style somehow...

Nice poem, you keep enough mystery to it to make the people think yet it is understandable though. You inserted good poetic wordings, making it interesting to read. The concept is one many can relate to I think yet you managed to make it your own as well. I love how you sometimes used only half words or half sentences yet expressed so much with them.

Keep at it sweetie, you are growing as a writer...

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