Nice read..
I thought the concept of death and destiny was a lil' played.. but other than that this was a pretty dope piece. It would of upped it if you would have included multies tho... I liked your vocab. it was deep, and the imagery was very nice aswell. Good piece.
If you can return the favor on this -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798
P's.