WTF ^ ... lol, wow.
The topic was ok, seen it before tho.
All ya verses were nice. I felt alot of emotion in them, to me thats what stood out. The vocab. was also very dope, and you got your point across in this write. the chorus was pretty good too.
I liked the 2nd verse the most though..
RTF-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798