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Originally Posted by Barr
It freed him from the shackles attaching his empathy to single thought
Her lip quivered in shock as they would grapple hips and attack their lips
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That line, for me, held alot of emotion and imagery. I applaud you on this peice, it was a good drop and a nice read man.
The flow was mostly consistant, it suited the topic. I didnt feel it leaned more poetic than OM.. I liked the fact that OM is getting some decent drops by talanted people for a change.
Keep it up man. Peace.