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Old 10-22-05, 03:38 PM   #24
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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i wasnt feelin the hook, just the structure of it and where u placed the end rhymes for it on this beat..... also i didnt liek the way the hook flowed... i didnt really like the beat either..... the verses were good and everythin else was straight but i think this track could be ALOT better.... and thats my feed
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