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Originally Posted by Tha Q.
wth was up with the intro?
turn "down" the volume...need to turn it up...vocals too low
and I cud hear u hit the mic or bump into it <><><
flow sounded like a rough draft
some good rhymes...
but u were flowin like u knew ya shit sounded dope...but WTF were u sayin>?
the voice in the background needs to STFU while Tito is spittin
and Tito...ur flow is lackluster here...and ur "break niggas down like weed" line is overused...u used it before
this track was straight up weird...and I didn't like it
effect on the vocals were weird
beat was boring
flows were routine
6/10
u two can drop better..MUCH MUCH better...One of you two should have stopped the other from posting this
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aiight Q... you already know my quality ain't all that great yet but it's gettin' better... can't get better if i don't try, right?... anyways
bump of the mic... intentional... adlibs say "yo, is this shyt on?" right before i did it...
i noticed that shyt with the voice also and it's getting deleted from behind tito's verse... small task...prolly take all of 3 seconds
i can take criticism... but you sounded straight up negative most of the way through... at least offer a way to improve the shyt without sounding like you hatin' altogether... not saying that ya didn't give a lil advice... but damn, dawg, make it seem like ya tryna help instead of tearing kats down...feed was appreciated but lighten up... it ain't that serious... and remember... you were doing ya own tracks way before i started doing my own... this is what?... my 5th track? you got like what? 200?...lol... omma build off this critique right here, though... i love da challenges...werdage