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wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

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Originally Posted by Implicit first time listening to both of you intro - very umm weird. but i think its too low. beat is nice and simple. the voice is still weird first verse - good multis. good flow. damn flow is hot. ha ha when u went to a low pitched voice kinda sounds like you copying tek 9 style. no hook? second verse - flow is okay. decent. lyrics kinda good. not as good as first verse though. flow sounds a little off at certain times. overall this was an okay song. the whole thing sounded a little quiet though so it was kinda hard to make out what you were saying.

"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

Originally Posted by Paranoid holy fuck you surprised me man, the intro sounds really really gay and its to long. for you gram I'd sau kinda at the start of your verse your adlibs kinda made it hard to understand you but it got better as you went on like damn you have such a underground style, so fast and everything I love that man, mos def dope, I can see you really tearin shit on rv later on. can't wait to collab wit ya man, tony or who ever that was lol, I think the flow could use work in some parts but it wasn't half bad, emotion was good. but overall it was tight overall this was a dope ass track fa sho.

"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

Originally Posted by Tha Q. wth was up with the intro? turn "down" the volume...need to turn it up...vocals too low and I cud hear u hit the mic or bump into it <><>< flow sounded like a rough draft some good rhymes... but u were flowin like u knew ya shit sounded dope...but WTF were u sayin>? the voice in the background needs to STFU while Tito is spittin and Tito...ur flow is lackluster here...and ur "break niggas down like weed" line is overused...u used it before this track was straight up weird...and I didn't like it effect on the vocals were weird beat was boring flows were routine 6/10 u two can drop better..MUCH MUCH better...One of you two should have stopped the other from posting this 1

"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

Originally Posted by <)-(> aiight Q... you already know my quality ain't all that great yet but it's gettin' better... can't get better if i don't try, right?... anyways bump of the mic... intentional... adlibs say "yo, is this shyt on?" right before i did it... i noticed that shyt with the voice also and it's getting deleted from behind tito's verse... small task...prolly take all of 3 seconds i can take criticism... but you sounded straight up negative most of the way through... at least offer a way to improve the shyt without sounding like you hatin' altogether... not saying that ya didn't give a lil advice... but damn, dawg, make it seem like ya tryna help instead of tearing kats down...feed was appreciated but lighten up... it ain't that serious... and remember... you were doing ya own tracks way before i started doing my own... this is what?... my 5th track? you got like what? 200?...lol... omma build off this critique right here, though... i love da challenges...werdage

"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

alright listening

[Production]

the quality was good in this..good job on the voice changing in the intro. i could understand everything clearly. there was no hiss in this. there was no pop or crackling or anything. good shit.you could use a pre amp though...your voice is a lil bit low. it doesnt have any power behind it. you should by an amplifyer. The beat was good. its nice and simple nothing i would spit too but ya'll played this off nicely

overall i give it 7/10 on production

I.G

Your flow is good. im feelin the multi's in this. shits crazy. your vocals are a lil bit low though. as i said. you should get a pre amp. The lyrics are alright some shit i cant undersstand because theres no bass in your voice. and some words you didn't pronounce correctly some shit was like d.d..d.d..d.d..but the lyrics were pretty good..there wasn't really punchlines..it was more of a self glorifying type verse. Vocabullary was good on this. you pulled off the syllables and timing quite nicely.

overall i give your shit 7/10

Tito

Alright check....i could understand everything you was sayin. The quality was alright. i don't like the effect you use. it sort of ruins the rhythm of your verse. quality wasn't that good. but shit was decent. lyrics was pretty good. i was feelin it. self glorifyin track aswell. shit was koo. long ass verse. your flow was good. went off beat a few times but it was pretty good.

overall i give you 7/10

this was an all around nice track overall i give it 7/10

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"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"

"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"