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Old 10-23-05, 05:56 AM   #2
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yo you had some not so good qaulity
the beat was dope not too original considering we all used this beat

yo you wherent real nice i think i did beter than you and your flow was oof in some places you could have used a chorus and i think you forgot to add an intro becuase we needed to have an intro so yeah
you also could have came alot harder lyrically and it seems liek you got alot a elevatign to do i would have to hear a newer song form you to see how fast yoru elevating..............not much to say about this track not really a song just a verse really..IMO

but yea work on yoru lyrics and try to elevate alot more and step up with the qaulity LE put out a tutorial on how to make wack qaulity soound nice, so word

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