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10-23-05, 02:55 AM | #1 | |||||
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yea for rapverse round 2...its in ma sig go 2 my soundclick and click on dont fuck with tha law
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10-23-05, 05:56 AM | #2 | |||||||
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yo you had some not so good qaulity
the beat was dope not too original considering we all used this beat yo you wherent real nice i think i did beter than you and your flow was oof in some places you could have used a chorus and i think you forgot to add an intro becuase we needed to have an intro so yeah you also could have came alot harder lyrically and it seems liek you got alot a elevatign to do i would have to hear a newer song form you to see how fast yoru elevating..............not much to say about this track not really a song just a verse really..IMO but yea work on yoru lyrics and try to elevate alot more and step up with the qaulity LE put out a tutorial on how to make wack qaulity soound nice, so word ummm leave feedback on my trakc thats about to me out in a few minutes i will up this thread with my link
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10-23-05, 06:13 AM | #3 | |||||||
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10-23-05, 01:50 PM | #4 | |||||||
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LMAO @ tha intro
ooh ahh eeh, LOL yo quality iz pritty good, betta then b4. i like it, shits dope. u know we gon do sum shit 2getha 1 of these days werd
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10-23-05, 04:05 PM | #5 | ||||
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lmao....that intro was fuckin funny......your quality in the beginning was decent for the intro.....ya flow was decent...and your lyrics was decent.......i like some of your back-ups....... but yeah up ya quality and emotion.....that'd make you a lot better..but yeah its cool..keep this shit up..... overall:7.6/10
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