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Old 10-23-05, 06:28 AM   #8
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aiight Q... you already know my quality ain't all that great yet but it's gettin' better... can't get better if i don't try, right?... anyways

bump of the mic... intentional... adlibs say "yo, is this shyt on?" right before i did it...

i noticed that shyt with the voice also and it's getting deleted from behind tito's verse... small task...prolly take all of 3 seconds

i can take criticism... but you sounded straight up negative most of the way through... at least offer a way to improve the shyt without sounding like you hatin' altogether... not saying that ya didn't give a lil advice... but damn, dawg, make it seem like ya tryna help instead of tearing kats down...feed was appreciated but lighten up... it ain't that serious... and remember... you were doing ya own tracks way before i started doing my own... this is what?... my 5th track? you got like what? 200?...lol... omma build off this critique right here, though... i love da challenges...werdage


wasn't tryna be negative...I didn't give my normal sugar coated feed because I wasn't in the mood for it

but when something strikes me as weird, it just is...and this track was weird to me...wasn't feeling the vibe

ur flow was good and ur rhymes were good, but u weren't sayin shit...u were too pretentious

and tito can come way better...he was out of his element on this beat...sounded like he was talkin...my advice, GO BACK TO YOUR NORMAL FLOW tito...with the energy and everything


sorry if I sound "negative" to you...but I have no reason to hate on anyone, esp. someone I'm cool wit



**well...maybe I got an issue...but I'll holla at u on PM or AIM or something


and YES...this is THA Q's alias
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