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Old 10-25-05, 10:33 AM   #2
PrahJect
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Intro:


I like the native american sample at the begining , it works with the beat...feelin the vibe....and also the drums kind of build up to summin intresting..so im feelin that...

First Verse:

lol at you tryin to the chant...iigh you come in...feelin the flow..delivery is good "clangin the chains together, like anne frank" liked that bit...like the lil sound effects you add to it...flow is staying pretty on line..fell of one bit but its ok..

Hook:

Hook is pretty good...likin the lil dubbs u add...

2nd verse:

likin the first 2 lines, seems a lil more rushed, flow is good, the bruce lee line was good...liked how u switchin the flow...thats what im tryin to work on..

Quality:

its very good, 10/10 for quality

Outro:

Liked that you added more chants...mixed in well to the track..

Overall:

8/10

Verdict: good track, flow was on point most of the track, fell of once which I can remember, delivery and precence good...keep up
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