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Old 10-25-05, 05:22 PM   #9
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ok, its startin
and I feel a connection to the intro, because my grand father was native american

your liln voice intro was weak though

your quality is weird.
your actual verse quality is good, but yo addlibs and dubs sound weird, and the hook sound weird too

but the ACTUAL song is aiigh, the 2nd verse SHITS on the 2nd verse.
the 2nd verse is dope as hell.
but when it comes to the entire song as a whole, you could've done WAAAAY better.
but its still aiigh, Better then the shit sheif been floodin the damn song forum with
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